Draft of Rhetorical Analysis

This blog post contains a link to my first draft of my Rhetorical Analysis.

"Draft Transcription." 10/13/15 via 1888typeitup.com

This is very much a work in progress. I am only about halfway done in terms of content, but I think (?) the first portion of my draft is fairly polished. As you read through keep in mind 2 things. 1, I plan on adding a lot of actual rhetorical analysis and a conclusion, for now I am just setting this up. 2, my introduction is very very long right now, but I like my interest catcher (the first paragraph). I'm interested on peer feedback for this interest catcher and the rest of my intro (first 3 paragraphs, last one is my thesis).