Draft of Public Argument

This blog post contains a link to my project draft. This is very much a work in process, and I will be spending a lot more time in the coming week working through this project. I have a very clear idea of where I am going moving forwards, just actually putting the project together is time consuming. For this reason I'd appreciate feedback that has nothing to do with what is missing, as I most likely know, but instead I'd love some feedback on whether or not the argument is effective.

"Work in Progress." 11/08/15 via longleafalliance