Draft of Open Letter

This blog post contains a link to my draft of my open letter, as well as some information for peer editors.

Oh, Mathias. "Bear Down!" 11/28/15 via Photos

I'm still working on this. I would love some feedback on what I have currently, just keep in mind I plan on adding more down the road. For now, I'd love to know what you thin of my writing, and how it fits the "open letter" genre, based on your personal opinion/knowledge.